Hikaru Nemoidia has a chainwhip? Cool name. Since chains and whips are so similar, I wonder they'd be like combined. For some reason the name Nemoidia makes me think of Star Wars. Don't know why.

These seem like pretty good characters to work with, I think. Of course its their personalities that'll determine that, I guess.

Cool stuff. Hope you start the story soon. If you can check out my story "Strike Me Down" I'd appriciate it. It's action. All action.