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Reviews For: Lost Spirit

xTempestx
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abusesimple and dark. i loved it.
dustytiger
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseokay just wow, perfect, don't change a thing, thank you for sharing
Kafkaman
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is a spectacular coincidence. I just happened to click the 'Just In' button and came across this poem, and reading it I came up with a small idea.

I have a sort-of fantasy story 'From the Shade of a Dream'-I won't ask you to read it, but go ahead if you want-and this poem would actually fit in with it very well. Do you mind if it makes a cameo in the story? (It would do so much later on, and I'd give you the credit for the poem.)
glegle56
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseI think it was awesome how u expressed so many emotions in so few words. I loved the poem.
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