i like that line 'put ur ear to the earth' bcuz it makes me think of this weird notion that everything thats gonna happen can be foretold. *shrugs* random thoughts. lol. beautiful imagery and awesome overall :)

~mez~

Ah...your talent blinds. :) There is something so captivating about "drawn close over distant freckles of sun". You have such a way of changing the way the reader looks at something as simple as smog, guiding them to see it as something else. Wonderful. `~bella~`