Hmm, so i am going to have to respectfully disagree with your first reviewer. I do not think that this subject is "overused" after all this is the love and angst section and this poem is about love and angst. About it being original, well pain is pain. How can pain be original? True there are different ways of writing about being hurt but the way you write is the "original" way for you. Anyways, i like the emotion in your poem. It is simple and gets the point of being hurt once again across.

The subject matter is overused, making it less catchy and original.