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Akiko-Sohma 2007-06-14 . chapter 1
Beautiful work, really. I could picture it.

Actually, I wanted to review you to repay the favor. Thank you for the kind review on my story, The 'Feel Good' Revolution. I'm glad you enjoyed. Though the story has 25 reviews, 23 of them are from the same person. Ah, I ramble. But thank you, honestly. And if you are interested, I am rewriting that story currently. (It was written last year, and I wanted to expand on it more, the new story is titled "Angra Mainyu." I gave it a different title, because I didn't want to delete the old one.) I hope I hear more from you. For now, I'm going to browse through your other stories.


Aki.
Archipelago 2006-11-25 . chapter 1
I think that this is a pretty good one-shot. The dialogue (which just happens to be most of it) is the best part, a little too used, but believable. I suppose. Good job.
SunriseGoodbyes 2006-09-14 . chapter 1
interesting. it's simple and morbid in a way. i like this, good job.
Circus Caprice 2006-08-19 . chapter 1
Good shi...I mean, good stuff.

Short but sweet. I enjoyed the portrayel of the roomate.
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