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| newfoundhope 2007-12-28 ch 7,  | abuseThis one is my favorite so far. :] Splendid diction. All of your poetry inspires me. |
| I.O.K.O 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseAnd then- the kiss of death. |
| tangelos 2007-02-25 ch 6, | abuseThis made me laugh out loud. Not particularly sophisticated, but it does work! thanks for sharing! :D |
| simpleplan13 2007-02-10 ch 10, | abusethat's an interesting way to look at it.. great idea |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's a very simple thought, but it really does say a lot. Wonderful work. Keep writing! :) |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-01-25 ch 9, | abuseDefinitely an interesting and lateral view on schizophrenia, I love the wording. Keep writing, Alan. |
| Failing Mentality 2006-12-22 ch 10, | abuseMy! Out of the ten, I like this one the best, Subdued Light. Failing Mentality. |
| NinjaStoryteller 2006-11-03 ch 9, | abuseI've found this to be true for a certain schizophrenic too. Longer than a typical haiku, but the last two lines are necessary. Very good with words, you are. |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-12 ch 8, | abuseinteresting concept...i have no idea what it means, but it sounds cool..lol |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 7, | abusegreat last line... love it |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 6, | abusesad with the title... beautifully and well written |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 5, | abusesweet piece with an amazing title! |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 4, | abuseinteresting poem based on the title... I like it a lot |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 3, | abuseinteresting extending the haiku and making both the last two lines 7 syllables... great descripton of a disco, but not your best poetic wise |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-04 ch 2, | abusebeautiful metaphor for faith.. amazingly written |