Hey I remember reading this... *smiles* Sorry, couldn't help it. I figured you didn't have hardly any reviews. And this is such a good story. I like it. I really do. I'll to read more, well. When it's not so late at night. ANyway, keep up the great work. You're an awesome writer. Later. K15

This story is incredible. I just tried to type a review, but fictionpress hates me. Haha! Anyways, I'm adding this to my favorite stories and then I'm printing out the rest of it and cuddling up with a cup of coffee to read. You are so great with the names of people and places. They are so unique! :)

Great work.

i like it. it's really good. that first scene with the kids fighting is so cute and so funny. it reminds me of my baby cousins and their friends at their sleepovers and my mom or someone else is trying to tell them a story and they won't stop arguing. it's pretty annoying but here it's really cute. now on to the next chapter.

it really kinda reminds me of the book Eragon but they have their differences i will have to say; this is pretty good so far and i will read more when i have the chance, i'm looking forward to finding out what happens next

AW! Poor Taeolyn, I'm sad now!

I thought Athena was the goddess of Wisdom, not Travel...I could be wrong. Mythology isn't really my study.

GREAT CHAPTER!

You have such an amazing writing style! True talent!

No name, huh? Awesome. My dragons are kinda like that, except they actually DO have names, but they never tell them to anyone, not even their Riders, so their Riders have to call them by a new name.

Ya know the Elf-maid in the first chapter? How do you pronounce her name?

It's very interesting. The background of where the story took place is ver descriptive. Heh, Myrun wanted a story with a bloody battlefield, almost like me (lol). I'll read the next chapters later.

Anyhoo, I belong to the group aka Meteor-Infinity, and we just recently made a collaboration story: Wish: Welcome to the Battle City. Hope you read and review!

See ya!

aka Mitternacht

o, can't wait for the next chapter...:) Thank you for updating so soon! :) you are going on my fav authors list.

I love the descriptiveness. The landscape sounds kinda like Ireland.

I love it! Reminds me of Eragon.

One of my main characters name is Gwyn too! Spelled the same. But she has curly red hair, shoulder-length, and bright green eyes. She's the main character's sister.

Can't wait for more!

A very descriptive first chapter. And please don't advertise on my story reviews.

I love the story...and I hope for more chapters...:)