Reviews for Abysmal Apprehension

Susurrus 2006-10-27 ch 1,	abuseGreat sensory details, I especially love the lines: 'All senses savouring the growing fire' and 'Crimson hidden behind clouds of pale'. And the last line, of course, really finishes it off very well. Great job!! Suss
koharu 2006-09-05 ch 1,	abuseHello! waves So I see you have an account here too! I had a the beginning of a novel/la that I was writing up here a short while ago...but then it needed editing so I took it down. Anyway, this isn't a place to talk about myself, is it? I quite like this poem of yours; you've created some nice strong images and the whole thing really creates quite an impact. I quite like the last two lines. =D
dustytiger 2006-08-19 ch 1,	abusethis is good, i'm at a loss for words, great work thank you for sharing