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| Sholunda 2008-05-09 ch 9, anon. | abuseI absolutely LOVE the story so far...please update & complete! |
| Lolita Pop 2007-06-13 ch 9,  | abuseThis story is so awesome! Update soon, okay?! :D |
| HumorMe 2007-04-19 ch 9, | abusePretty good pretty good! |
| readergirl1 2007-04-16 ch 9, | abuseAw...so cute! |
| Marked*BY*Melinda 2007-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, this story is INCREBIDLE! I love it! Tony is really domineering but does it cause he loves her and that's why i like him! Does every thing w/ good intention! keep it coming! |
| debrown700 2007-04-02 ch 9, | abuseGoodness...thanks for the update. Jamilah, if you're gonna pick a fight and break up with him...due you gotta stand your ground. Don't let him run all over you, lol. Tony is being really mysterious around Jamilah...I mean seriously, to Jamilah (which I understand) he is being really secretive. And the draw of condoms, recent picture of ex, and no attempt to involve her in his life seems a bit shady. |
| HumorMe 2007-03-14 ch 6, | abuseI think that thei character development is rushed. Why are you going so fast with what makes a wholesome couple? More stories of them togeather would really help with the love development. |
| rocky19 2007-03-13 ch 6, | abusei really like this story, there are a couple of mistakes though, like you changed his height a couple of times and just some of the wording is incorrect, but i till really like it |
| debrown700 2007-03-13 ch 6, | abuseLOL when Jamilah made the one ball comment, and lmao at Anthony's dump comment...I would be embarrassed as hell if a guy said that to me. LOL. These two have a cute relationship but what's up with him not revealing his life to her. I'd figure out of the two that he'd be the one to open up completely and she'd be the guarded one. Hm, what's gonna happen between these two. Thanks for the update...hopefully the next one will be faster (wink, wink). LOL. |
| debrown700 2007-01-24 ch 5, | abuseOh yeah, Tony's whipped...please continue. LOL. |
| Rana 2007-01-19 ch 5, anon. | abusei LOVE this story so far. please update soon! |
| HumorMe 2007-01-15 ch 5, | abuseI like the chapters. The other day you uploaded and deleted them to edit it dind't you? The only thing that concerns me is that whenever your writing about anyone other than Jamilah or Anthony it gets kinda dull... I am really glad that you did post them though! |
| xXxMoonlitexXx 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abusegood update I want to see what's going to happen I aching to find out. |
| xXxMoonlitexXx 2006-12-18 ch 3, | abuseI really like but you need to update plez! |
| Stank You 2006-12-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseFinally I can submit a review. I was pretty shut out when I wasn't able to the first time I read this. But anyways, wow. This is very good; you have something going here and I hope you kept it up. |