You have a catchy story title. Everytime I see it, I surely click on it but somehow as soon as I read the first paragraph I click the back button. I'm sorry maybe it's just me but lengthy descripton of scenery bore me a little. Of course other people would have different opinion :)
Different people like different thing. I'm sure your style of writing suit someone out there.
I decided to write review coz you were saying something about having a lot of hits but not so many reviews :)
I'm quite sure your story is not bad. I would want to continue reading when I have more time :)
I love princess story :) And Irene is my sister's name hehehe and I happen to use it on one of my princess story, too!

Awesome, awesome, AWESOME story so far!

I thought this was a very intriging way to start a story! I totally have to read on!

hey nice story i like it...keep it up..i just didnt' wanted to write in middle of reading so i waited until i finsh reading those chpts... and write u know like know wht's going on... okay i have a question why her father is so like up tight guy... why his children are scared of him... they dont have a mother his father should be nice to them..like give them both sides father and mother... i understand he have to be that way..but he need to loose up a lil... okay nice story ...good luck...

I liked it a lot and I understand how you feel. My first 4 or 5 stories got barely any reviews and I was so discouraged. Finally though on my fic I'm getting a good amount of reviews and a huge number of hits. Update soon. This chapter was good. My school started today so good luck tomorrow!

hi, great story so far. but i just wanted to say a couple of constructive comments. firstly, some advice i received about my own story on fanfiction...don't spend too much time getting caught up in describing everything. i think you need to make the story move a little faster, and add in more dialogue. i'm not saying to rush through everything, but you're already on the seventh chapter and nothing much has happened.

apart from that, everything is great. spelling, grammar etc... all cool. and please don't take offense to what i said; i only wanted to give you some advice that i myself found useful.

Here's a review for you. I liked it except I thought it a bit much that she spilled her life story to him and she barely knew him. I also think you writing is slightly awkward at times with words and structure but other than that it is fantastic. I think the characters are very well written and I like the setting and backround. Update soon.

i like the story so far. i can't wait for more.

LOL! That would have been a good lie exept she gave herself away that she went out and also she stammered it would have been realy funny if the leader would have tripped! Oh and who is going to help her run the kingdom?

Ah boy she should have tried to duck past him or try and outsmart him! It would have made for a funnier reencounter! But then again she is a lady. Update soon!

Right so if both her brother and her father leave... Who will help her with ruling the throne? Anyway good job and update soon!