|Reviews for Innocent|
| soliloquist 4/19/07 . chapter 1
It made me cry. It is a very powerful piece of writing. The images, the repeated motifs, everything- perfect.
Often it is difficult to tell if 'you' is the priest or the brother. And instinctual, at the start of teh final segment, is not a word. You should have used instinctive.
Thanks for the opportunity to read such a great piece of writing.
| mobman 2/10/07 . chapter 1
im in shock, and there are chills that wont go away in my spine. If thats wha you were hoping for, you nailed it. Great job
| Aleksis 10/19/06 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD.
Seriously, such a beautiful piece. It's really evocative, and sad, and witty. Beautiful description, wonderful writing (especially the passage about the slippery vine). And I must admit that the rabid sexist in me assumed that the narrative voice was male. I've got to fix that sometime...
But, like, 10/10. Fabulous. :)