This is one of the deepest poems I have read on this site! I have not seen many writers on Fictionpress who think that deeply about the world around them and put it into words! Excellent work!

Hello!First of all, thank you very much for your review, it means more because it actually says more than just "nice poem". This is the first poem of yours I read, and I like what I read ^_^. The thought behind it I find wonderful, because I always have discussion with people whether a sound is a sound when no one hears it. Keep up the thoughtful poetry!

AAH! This is really good! I read it over and over. (I even made my husband listen as i read it.)My favorite part is the last line ( by the way, It's ok that it doesn't rhyme, you don't always have to be technical about things; the feeling behind the words is what counts) "as if I am to feel you, we both must feel the touch." Great Job!

Oh. This is so *pretty*. The descriptions were luffly, and the ending was so light and... I *love* how you rhyme. It fits together so perfectly. This was excellent!

Cha xx

Wow. This is like, a miracle. Meh. Even though you didn't rhyme the last two lines, it sounded so... perfect together. Brilliant. ^^ I absolutely love this. -hugs-