Reviews for Angel of the Crimson Halo Rewrite

Reviews For: Angel of the Crimson Halo Rewrite

merrymowmow 2007-04-05 ch 4,	abuseI really like what you've done with this story, and I'd hate to see you throw it away.
merrymowmow 2006-11-23 ch 3,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update.
KereiKitsune 2006-10-05 ch 3,	abuseI read! I read! I'm just slow getting onto the site! :D I like these new chapters! Either they're very different from the originals or I have a very bad memory. I don't remember Damon talking... course I've read so much with Opie I'm forgetting I think :P bwah... ^^ I still like though. When do Jason and Doc come in? ^^
KereiKitsune 2006-10-05 ch 2,	abuseWhee! Didn't she say something about how young he was last time? Hm :3 does Ren ever get back at that cop?
KereiKitsune 2006-10-05 ch 1,	abusetwas different. Twas very very different :D But I like it
braindead1345 2006-09-19 ch 2,	abuseIm confused...i thought he didnt what to end up like his father...? so hes hearing voices that are like his dad, calling him weak,so he does stuff that maybe he wouldnt do otherwise? Anyways,nice details,I can see the blood dripping on the porch (im typing this as i read) The tall lady seems nice,i dunno why,maybe alittle strict,but a lovely preson. Ahh...is she lonely? poor lady. and poor ricke! he misses his mom...id mise mine,too...prevy voice,but i guess its ture,why else would she save a stranger on the run...i said it myself,shes lonely...sings off key lonely,lonely lady...saved poor muderer boy...stops singing that voice isnt good...blood feitist?im stupid,i thought that his cloths had disapived and he was goingto have to like,make cloths out of towels...-.-'shes responable? how can he tell? i never can tell if pll are or not... Thats so nice! shes offering breakfest! he better leave before he kills her... i like who nateral his thoughts seem! Haha, a dust circus! YAY! why is she acting so wierd all of the sidden "one of those psychos on tv"? thats mean! okay,okay shes cool again! i guess it just freaked her out...shes trying to make him feel better,but it wont worry...poor rickie! i bet its the police at the door!gotta go tobed! sorry!
braindead1345 2006-09-13 ch 1,	abuseChrist...this is deep,you have already built a pretty sound idea of his character already...how do you do it?
Anani Moose 2006-09-11 ch 3,	abuseHey! I read these! i really really like the rewrites a lot better than the originals, this has so much more insight and feeling. It's very well written, and the grammer improvements help too! (now tell me who you like!!)
Xxyours-trulyxX 2006-09-10 ch 1,	abuseI love the story so far. I've only read the first chapter, but I think I'm hooked. You describe things so well, and I can picture it in my head. You are a very talented writer, and I can't wait to read the next few chapters.
Tanin 2006-08-31 ch 2,	abuseToyfest, friday night: RAIN AND THUNDER...I only got to go on 1 ride, which I paid $8 for the whole night, all rides...$8 just to go down a stupid slide TT^TT...well anywasy... HOMG!?!?!?! "Her" name was never mentioned! I was in anticipation for it throughout the whole story...XD I dunno, I guess she's a useless character, but you did put the sex scene so discretely XD I really hope you come up this weekend ^_^ I'm going to clean the house tommorow, and I'm going to finish my APamerican homework on Sunday and monday so it's all GOOD says like in Bruce almighty... ~Tanin (random word of the day is: Spidey man's cheese noodle...O_O that came out a bit wrong...XD LMAO)
alexa-xox 2006-08-31 ch 2,	abuseHeyy I'm bck to review...chapter 2! WOW I cn rhyme!! LOL!! Anyways bck tot he review...this was a really good chapter...I luv the voice in his head...very amusing to read!! Wats her name..i never read her name...maybe it was just me!! Anyways she is a really sweet character, I mean its pretty weird how she just looks after him although he's a murderer...but a great character all the same!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! Alexa xox
Tanin 2006-08-29 ch 1,	abusestarts singin Ren's hearing voices! Ren's hearing voices! stops suddenly and gasps quotes text:did not falsely advertise an extra Y chromosome...LMFAO omgoodness mum looked at me insanely after that...I'm assuming that's relating to mental retardation but ANyways...I'm reading AND writing again! It's amazing, it's a revelation! Oh and I didn't know Ren was from OuterBanks, >gets out the flametorch< cute little smile I hate those small cactus' that you can step on...^_^...heh ^_^;...well yeah I'm going to actually read these rewrites, oh and I also RE-read Harley's story...it's captivating...truly... So go see my new story, it sucks compared to yours but I wrote it within 1 hour so I'm happy cuz it's two pages and I'm already onto doing the 2nd chapter XD has brain aneurism (sp?) and dies throws sporks and other manners of mass destruction at Gaki UPDATE DAMN IT! (ha I bet you thought you had a new reviewer and got all excited about this XD) ~your outrageous friend,Tanin (random word of the day: pig snouts and pocky...okay fine it's a sentence but so what!?!?!?!?)
alexa-xox 2006-08-23 ch 1,	abuseWOW...this rewrite is already interesting me!! I mean what you've written so far...excells the last one!! Although the story doesn't seemed to have changed so mux!! I am intrigued to read the rest of this...really looking forward to it!! Seriously...this story roxs! Keep it up plz!! Update soon.. Alexa xox

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