love your writing style, it's like you go right to the heart of the matter, and don't stray, and somehow you take those emotion put a common rhythm to it and BAM! it's an awesome poem

great job tiger!

Interesting repitition - quite effective.

Great work, very nicely written. There was obviously a lot of thought put into this poem. Keep writing and posting.

I really like this. I can relate to it. I also like how its generalized so it can apply to anybody.

I noticed in...about line 7 you say 'i never did many thing' I think its things. Just to let you know but otherwise great job.

This was great! A lot of people can relate to this piece.

Keep writing-Sadistikal