This is an interesting poem. We have a lot to learn from the ocean. I reminds me of Siddhartha's river. I recommend this short novel by Herman Hesse.

Hmm...I won't do my usual format of reviewing, only because that takes to long! (Lot of Laughs, Laugh Out Loud)
Okay then, creative review.
Enchanting poem, it was so whimsicle (Spelling?). I do believe this shall have accomplished it's way onto our favourites list. I am ever so sorry to say that I am changing my side of the pen-name to "Serpent" instead of "Nephthys". Bast had disagreed to this task (for now at least) and will keep her name. We label our array of selections, so if you do review my displayed pieces, please take the time to read the author's note and see if it says "Nephthys" or "Serpent".
Sincerely with Many Thanks,
Nephthys/Serpent

P.S. This advice column (review) has taken to (much thought)long to write, so YOU BETTER (PLEASE) REVIEW MY WORK. I WRITE TO PLEASE THE PUBLIC!

I really liked this a lot. Beutifully written. Keep writing.

The diction in this is dreamlike and elegant. I like your use of rhyme; it sounds natural and it flows well. Overall, a very enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!