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| rockjam 2008-07-03 ch 12,  | abuseloved it. great story. |
| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-06-30 ch 12, | abuseupdate on Caroline's story soon! this was another good story ;] |
| anitsirK 2008-06-20 ch 12, | abuseOh my. Hahahaha... That was certainly one of the best reads in FP! Your "Petals" was also REALLY REALLY great! You're such a gifted writer. I don't know how you do it, but it's like your writing is magic! Hahaha. You write so wonderfully, that the feelings you are portraying through your writing are also felt by the reader. :) It's very powerful. And I love your stories to bits. Original characters, plots and excellent writing. Keep on writing! (I used the word 'writing' a lot, didn't I? LOL) |
| Annihilate.My.Mind 2008-03-07 ch 12, | abuseAh.. naked confessions. She was so brittle underneath all the fearless facade. You must do a lot of research for this. What wonderful stories! |
| Maria Regina 2007-12-11 ch 12, | abuseI would have to say... (no offence intended,) that the previous one you did was more successful. It had a better mood/vibe to it. Not exactly sure why. I thought it might have had something to do with the storyline. The whole flower thing appealed to me (and my various friends) more than just a girl that doesn't trust men. Looking forward to your other one... |
| s-pecial-lee me 2007-10-19 ch 12, | abuseaww. i love this story. its so sweet! |
| anonymous 2007-10-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis second chapter had me cracking up before I even got halfway through. Lorraine whining and Melvin being Melvin and that Claribel's narrative line that smoothly went into scolding to the butler. XD (perhaps being sleep-deprived is not helping my sanity either? >_O) and these two sentences in particular, for some random reason: She didn’t need a man. - Glen had never felt less like a man in his life. I loved how those two lines, ending and beginning the two sections contrasted so perfectly. Your writing is amazing~! (yes, I've read the previous ones and not commented on them. :P Annabel is a funny(and strange) girl. Melvin is just outright hilarious. :D) |
| Midnight Artist 2007-09-04 ch 12, | abuseaaw! too sweet! |
| Midnight Artist 2007-09-03 ch 6, | abusehm, even platte's NAME sound evil and vile! |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-08-13 ch 12, | abuseLoved it! You rock! Moving on now! - LL |
| sealednectar 2007-08-09 ch 12, | abuseHas Lorraine been tamed, I think not. Now she has someone she can go into taverns in the night when she shouldn't be. Great story, great writing:) |
| Rory Gilroy 2007-07-18 ch 12, | abuse=D i loved this one TOO! |
| Liviania 2007-07-15 ch 12, | abuseLorraine rocks - it's wonderful that she got a man who doesn't mind her being a hoyden. I love your romances. Livi |
| OctoberAvenue 2007-06-28 ch 12, | abuseI'm glad that everything has fallen into place now!! Nice ending! |
| toxic-noodle725 2007-06-22 ch 12, anon. | abusecute! |