I love all your stories! Lol. If you're wondering how I read them all in a single day, i didn't. I read them some time ago. I'm reviewing them today...lol.

I love Lor and Glen.

I wish I had a Glen.:)

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"She didn’t need a man. Glen had never felt less like a man in his life."
XD Ok lol.

Now I definitly think I should read this...

Let see if undesrtand ; Glen's mother is metis and Glen's father is English. Glen has a sister, and lives near of the St Laurant.
Ok.

Well I think you're very couragous to take such a demadning characterisation least ou personally know abouthese three cultures or are a very good googler. I hope you upheld it toughout the story.

Aside of that, the mix of English and French was very difficult to get in the frist paragraph.
And somehow, I notice that the style is more plain in this chapter than in any of Petals. Some part like he retorted, or he sais, are not very needed to undesrtand the dialog as well.

See ? Am I not whinny ? That's what I don't know if I should read this story. I'll just ramble and ramble about every french thing and indian culture.

For now, I shud up and go check on chapter two...
Still dunno if the story attracts me enough or not, yet, but I am relived (glad?) that the style has the same simplicity and clary from Petals.

This is by far, my favorite of your stories! So funny! And I really like the attraction between them - both of them were reluctant to admit it. I liked how they were both kind of "rough" around the edges, but had soft sides - like where he would watch out for her and she was secretly happy he was there.

Well written and fitting for Lorraine. I´m happy that they worked it out in the end even if they did it just in the last scene. Well done. Well Beatrice Millard shot herself in her own leg with tossing that rumor out. Poor Great Aunt of hers... A good
I liked Lorraine, she is an interesting and engaging Character. Nice that we got to see a glimpse of Annabelle.
Good Story, well done.

Aw, I can't believe Lorraine got married (I mean this in the best possible way). She was so adamant that marriage wasn't for her and then she marries Glen.

Glen was really sweet (except at the end when he was a jerk but at least he knew he was a jerk so that makes it slightly better).

I can't believe that that is the reason Lorraine decided not to marry. That guy was a total ass and deserves to go die in a hole or something equally as painful.

Anyway, as always, I loved the story.

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just downright amazing

very enjoyable story :) great job!

Great story, I just feel that it didn't have much of the ending effect. I guess, when I was reading the last chapter it felt so rushed? I don't know, they were fighting and next paragraph it's over. And I felt that there were just many things that was left off, such as, who the ring was from, or maybe I just missed a part?? I don't know, nonetheless it was still a good story.

loved it. great story.

update on Caroline's story soon! this was another good story ;]

Oh my. Hahahaha... That was certainly one of the best reads in FP! Your "Petals" was also REALLY REALLY great! You're such a gifted writer. I don't know how you do it, but it's like your writing is magic! Hahaha. You write so wonderfully, that the feelings you are portraying through your writing are also felt by the reader. :) It's very powerful. And I love your stories to bits. Original characters, plots and excellent writing.

Keep on writing!

(I used the word 'writing' a lot, didn't I? LOL)

Ah.. naked confessions. She was so brittle underneath all the fearless facade. You must do a lot of research for this. What wonderful stories!

I would have to say... (no offence intended,) that the previous one you did was more successful. It had a better mood/vibe to it. Not exactly sure why. I thought it might have had something to do with the storyline. The whole flower thing appealed to me (and my various friends) more than just a girl that doesn't trust men.
Looking forward to your other one...

aww. i love this story. its so sweet!