 abba12 2007-07-28 . chapter 1A bleeding splash of unwritten words on my wrists
i love that line, just the meaning in it, the emotion, and the conflict to love. ive been through that conflict, though not in the same way this poem describes.
love it |
 NothingMoreNothingLess 2006-10-28 . chapter 1This is... beautifuly, breathtakingly well written. I love it. Definatly going on my faves.
Cassandra |
 Midnight Star Lights 2006-10-11 . chapter 1Beautiful job like always. |
 hateandkill-D 2006-09-16 . chapter 1I really like this! Great job! |
 Nyghts Dark Desire 2006-08-20 . chapter 1Wow! This is the first poem of yours I've read in a long time and I LOVE it! You've really sharpened your skills! It's such a sweet poem too (in that dark kinda way...) The first few lines made me think of my poem "Body Art." Keep up the good work and keep writing! |
 trouble-makerz-4ever 2006-08-20 . chapter 1interesting...
~Jynx~ |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-08-20 . chapter 1The emotions are very dark in this, and in a weird way a great painful, mystical kind of dark that's somehow poetic. You wrote this quite well, the descriptions and the somewhat-metaphorical lines are well done. |
 ebonydragon 2006-08-20 . chapter 1Wow... |