Hopeful and sweet. gave me a feeling of mystical beauty and an enchanted forest (what?). you are so talented. your writing is uplifting and refreshing. keep it up.

check out some of my new works. write on.

-Em

I read the review by rhyme and reason, and wow, I hadn't thought of this poem that way...I percieved it to be more personal. And the owl gives it a nice touch of softness, too. My one critique is that the short lines are a bit distracting, and make it harder for me to understand the rhyme scheme.

Nice poem, but the lines are broken very short. Anyhow, I enjoyed reading the poem, and good luck with future works! Keep on writing!

♥sarah

Deeply meaningful, this one. Of course, on the surface it's about the sun and the moon. But it seems like you're really commenting on the state of humanity (yeah, could that BE anymore general? probably not). We understand that we'rd in a period of darkness, and we see each glimmer of hope as a possible savior. Yet still we hope for a larger event, the ultimate rescue: the sun. THAT or I'm completely over-analyzing this, and should be kicked out of the English Department.

J

D'aww... Certainly touching. Me likes. :smile: