wow, strong finish, i like the personal voice in this poem, the itallic bold words definatly was a twist. this character seemed like someone i know, it's very relatable.

I LOVE this - love, love, love! I'm so happy - this is just the best, not only in style and rhythm but also content! One itty tiny thing - is the last word in the third grouping supposed to be wild? Typo? Maybe? But I don't care - because it's great! Woo Hoo!

A well done and beautifully written piece. Good work!

Laurel B.