Rikku-chan! *waves excitedly* I didn't know that you had a fictionpress account! ^o^

Loved the story! Very cute, and it had a good cheesy moral. :-)

Ah, it all makes sense now! Hehe. This was cute, this would make an awesome children's book. You should definitely seek a publisher, no? You can even draw your own pictures. =P
Anyway, fantastic job, it made me laugh at the end. Keep up the great work! *Fave*

AWW!! this is SO cute!! I love it! Everything fits in so well, and the you can acutally clearly see the moral in the story!! very nice!!