OK WOW

Normally I'm not a fan of short poems. But WOW! It showed all the imagery of a long poem and I just love it all. You are a very talented writer.

Dillutional

wow... i love this! its goin on my favs! anyways, i loved the emotion and the ending line. the ryhmes were great and the imagery was wonderful. a great poem for it being so short. wonderful.