 itsVKEE 2009-09-05 . chapter 3OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG~
UPDATE PRONTO!
I SO WANNA KNOW WHAT BAPPENED/HAPPENS!
PLEASE!
why are you're stories so OMG-worthy?
whatever i love itt. |
 cynthian. 2009-08-25 . chapter 3 it's been years! i love your writing and all that ;D but i can't stand this waiting, haha. 62nd review! anyway haha i've read this a billion times :D |
 Night-Rayne 2009-04-26 . chapter 3Hi, I just wanted to say that this first chapter makes the story sound intriguing and I do hope you continue it. |
 Ocean's pebble 2009-03-17 . chapter 3Oo.. cryptic and mysterious... This sound really good, I hope you keep writing it! |
 aureliasilver 2009-03-15 . chapter 3 I do wish you would take up this story again. It's got one of those great plot bunnies. |
 alice 2009-01-10 . chapter 1 The intro/summary, "When your once best friend, his now best friend ...more difficult to move past teenage drama than it should be." was kind of confusing, but after i read the first chapter i got it.
The plot seems to have great potential. |
 aureliasilver 2008-12-09 . chapter 3 Just re-read the edited chapter and must say that it flowsbetter than the original. Lots of mystery - all personified I Ashley herself. Lots of possibilities. He you pick this back up. |
 Anonymous 2008-10-24 . chapter 3 promising start. I am already curious about what happens next and what has happened between the band and Ashley. Also, the fact that I adore the name "Ashley" is a pro for your story:) |
 peaceloverocknroll21 2008-10-22 . chapter 1this was really good. ive read a lot of ur work and everytime i get sucked in. please write more! for my sanity at least |
 lebelleballade 2008-10-08 . chapter 3If you don't update this story, I'll... I'll... I'll come after you with a chopper! D: |
 scenicmoods 2008-08-25 . chapter 3Hey!
I don't usually review, but reading this first chapter really spurred me on. You have such a great plot idea here!
It was so refreshing to read something that is a bit different to the other stories up on fictinopress at the moment. Mostly because you made it a mystery to who Ashley will end up in a relationship with.
I like the edited version of chapter one better than the original because Ashley's and the band members' thoughts were much clearer to discern. So good work there!
I really believe that with a bit of motivation and a plan of the plot- you could create an amazing story.
I hope that this review will help you continue this awesome piece of fiction! |
 ms. thorek 2008-08-24 . chapter 3please please please continue with this story... |
 Eye Lof Ewe 2008-08-20 . chapter 3I'm very intrigued by this story. I know you said it'd be updated sporadically, but I'm really excited to read the next installment. |
 HappyLittleLoser 2008-08-20 . chapter 3this one is really good, please continue it!! |
 aureliasilver 2008-08-20 . chapter 3 Ok You have me hooked. Sounds very intriguing. Is there more to come? |