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UPDATE PRONTO!

I SO WANNA KNOW WHAT BAPPENED/HAPPENS!

PLEASE!

why are you're stories so OMG-worthy?

whatever i love itt.

it's been years! i love your writing and all that ;D but i can't stand this waiting, haha. 62nd review! anyway haha i've read this a billion times :D

Hi, I just wanted to say that this first chapter makes the story sound intriguing and I do hope you continue it.

Oo.. cryptic and mysterious... This sound really good, I hope you keep writing it!

I do wish you would take up this story again. It's got one of those great plot bunnies.

The intro/summary, "When your once best friend, his now best friend ...more difficult to move past teenage drama than it should be." was kind of confusing, but after i read the first chapter i got it.
The plot seems to have great potential.

Just re-read the edited chapter and must say that it flowsbetter than the original. Lots of mystery - all personified I Ashley herself. Lots of possibilities. He you pick this back up.

promising start. I am already curious about what happens next and what has happened between the band and Ashley. Also, the fact that I adore the name "Ashley" is a pro for your story:)

this was really good. ive read a lot of ur work and everytime i get sucked in. please write more! for my sanity at least

If you don't update this story, I'll... I'll... I'll come after you with a chopper! D:

Hey!

I don't usually review, but reading this first chapter really spurred me on. You have such a great plot idea here!

It was so refreshing to read something that is a bit different to the other stories up on fictinopress at the moment. Mostly because you made it a mystery to who Ashley will end up in a relationship with.

I like the edited version of chapter one better than the original because Ashley's and the band members' thoughts were much clearer to discern. So good work there!

I really believe that with a bit of motivation and a plan of the plot- you could create an amazing story.

I hope that this review will help you continue this awesome piece of fiction!

please please please continue with this story...

I'm very intrigued by this story. I know you said it'd be updated sporadically, but I'm really excited to read the next installment.

this one is really good, please continue it!!

Ok You have me hooked. Sounds very intriguing. Is there more to come?