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Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-17 ch 2,	abuseHurry up and update! Its a cliffhanger and I dont like them!
lauren 2008-06-26 ch 3, anon.	abuseis this going to be a series? i think it would be a good one. please change it into one please?
xHopeLesSdReaMeRx 2008-05-30 ch 3,	abusei love it.. i can't wait to know what happened in their past.. please update soon..
Emtec 2008-05-28 ch 3, anon.	abuseI want more, please!
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-29 ch 3,	abuseOkay, now I'm disappointed! I really want to know what happened next and it was an authors note! and then you drop the bombshell that you maynt be carrying it on! Why ever not?! I really like it! Im a loyal person! I'll stick around! Please keep going- its a huge cliff hanger you have left me with!
Anna 2008-04-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseGreat story! Hope you will finish it in the future!
chocolaterain 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abusethis is actually another review for chapter 3. i just forgot to add this in. These are really just my questions about the story. Like how about in the 18th paragraph it says: "...her expression hardened at the sight of him. He started-that expression was eerily reminiscent of another scowl in another face - or was it another face?" Two questions for this one. One is jeremy who thinks it's familiar? Another question. in the 29th paragraph it says: "If he said it any louder, maybe the spirit of his old friend would disappear - and he couldn't remember why he had ever wanted that." Does that mean that he had wanted his friend to disappear before?
chocolaterain 2007-12-08 ch 3,	abuseI love this story!! Even though it's only one chapter. I read your author's note and noticed that you haven't updated since may. and that made me sad because i really like this story. Please will you update even if it's random please update. It would mean a lot to me and i don't want to see a good story get wasted because some jackass out there didn't update and realize how good of a story it was. So please update? Please? I guess it's okay if you don't but it would be a waste of a good story. Please update as soon as possible if your willing to. I don't want to force you to do anything that you don't want to do. But please don't let a good story go to waste.
michelle 2007-12-07 ch 3, anon.	abusehi! i really like this story! pls update it! i think it would be good! and really interesting!
Shadowe Goddess 2007-11-28 ch 3,	abusemoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!
freakyAngel 2007-10-29 ch 3,	abuseI like this edited one better. It's more detailed, shows more emotion. And there's probably lesser mistakes, too. I think it's a bit unfair to readers that you're only willing to update if there are enough reviews. How much is enough? Everyone has different standards. And it deprives us of a new story, just because nobody reviews or reads your work. It's like punishing us for something we don't deserve. Plus, most writers on FP continue updating even as they wait for people to R&R. It's fair on both sides - we get to read something, you get to slowly improve. How're we supposed to know how good you are or if you're improving if you don't give us more material to assess you by? Anyways, other than a few spelling mistakes (had became ahd, all that stuff) and maybe a few others, the plot sounds good so far. And the characters sound pretty interesting. Update!
lou 2007-10-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseinteresting twist on a favorite theme. i like that you made the characters older, too. i hope you continue this! i really enjoyed it!
LethargicLove 2007-09-01 ch 3,	abuseI can't remember if I ever reviewed this, although I'm pretty sure that I DID review one of the chapters. Anyway, I'm hoping that you're still willing to continue this story, even if it is later on. I'm still content with reading Matchmaker updates anyway but this story is intriguing as well. Are you planning on telling it through a flashback point of view for a while, or what? I really, really want to know what happened between them. I'm guessing the story is mainly going to be about Ash and Jeremy then though, as well as her becoming friends with Mike again. Hope you upgrade again!
shynbright 2007-08-09 ch 3,	abuseThe chapter's really catchy and I wanna know more about the grudge and their past so please please please update. The only thing that is kinda confusing though is that little inner thought in the beginning, i kinda don't get it or what it has to do with the plot...
awaiting.rain 2007-07-07 ch 3,	abusei really like this story so far. i hope you continue.

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