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It's got a nice feel to it. Well, not a *nice* feel, but it portrays the mood well (to put it in a more pretentious light).

My one criticism is that I think the two lines that are three syllables interrupt the rhythm of the piece a litte, as all the others are two. A minor point though...

_ yet again i can relate to your work. great job. it had a lovely flow to it!

rira-chan