Cool! I love this! Great job!

first of all, thank you for what you wrote in your profile about me. it made me smile ... and i needed that today. god, it means more than i can express ... so thank you so much. ♥

this is shorter, but so ** powerful and it's just amazing. the meaning, the feeling just screams and it's incredible. you said so much in so few words -- and somehow i can relate to this feeling today. you used the words perfectly and the imagery, the way you worded it makes it just cut sharply and it's just perfect. the ending is the best part -- just so ** powerful. i love this. [adds to faves]

♥ alison

This fills me with such overpowering sorrow and a slight of anger. "Joy, / to have witnessed / the death of / something so insignificant." That just tears me to pieces. Wonderful poem though. You wrenched such emotion out of this reader, and that's the intention.