Your poetry never ceases to amaze me!

Good poem. Pretty title.

~Twilight Starr~

I love the last line of this ("sing it to me in a foreign language") and the alliteration of "monochrome moths." Really gorgeous all around. Keep writing! :)

this is brilliant. honestly. it's a fave. i'm not even sure what to say. each line is such amazing perfection. honestly. i cant express how much i like this poem.

i am in love with that last line. anonymity, filters, shade. gorgeous. i understand myself.

I love moths more than butterflies. I told this to someone and they thought that it was funny to like moths. So I love that phrase, "monochrome moths."

And "sing to me in a foreign language". It's all gorgeous. :)

Wow, this was really beautiful. I'm definately adding it to my favorites.

"sing it to me in a foreign language" So lovely. Wonderful, really. I looked up the Tyndall effect. I never knew it had a name before. I love lying in bed with sun streaming through the window and watching the particles of dust dance in the gleaming light. Beautiful poem.

marie