Wow! That was really beautiful! Great job!

Beautiful. I love this!

Articulate, well written with amazing imagery. I love how this almost reads as both a collection of haiku and as a stand-alone poem. The word use here was amazing and, best of all, it was brimming with subdued emotion. Amazing work.

Daze

Ah, now see this is quite eloquent and beautiful.

Nice diction and pleasant tone.