It seems fitting that a writer would struggle to find the words that can convey the writer’s emotion. It reminds me of this idea someone said to me a while ago about writing taking away from you because every time you writer something it is no longer yours alone, so its important you write it properly. I understand the struggle and can empathize with your haiku, though the haiku itself seems a mere statement than a poem. I liked this as a statement, but it is hardly a poem. Perhaps next time try to include the emotion you’re trying to express rather than just the suggestion of it. Keep writing.

Daze

It feels like this poem is a little empty of meaning since you are asking me, as the reader, to help you find the proper words to convey the thoughts.

Perhaps give me more insight as to the source of your confusion - the depth of your pain or happiness? It is hard to even pinpoint whether you are happy or sad - although I am more inclined to believe you are upset about something.

I do like the start you have and the title is quite intriguing. I hope I didn't sound harsh - I sense you can grow greatly as a writer.