Glad to see you've updated again!
You're descriptions are amazing,and leave me with a sense of both being there, and wanting to be there. I especially liked: "Me, I only saw one, and it was a vivid, dying star, which shook me to my bones and made the night triumphant in my eyes. It tore itself from the pattern of the stars and crossed through the atmosphere, gone in almost an instant; but so magical, so singularly silence, that I had to try not to cry."
All in all, awesome job! Keep up the great work!

Looks like your onto something

A great update. Reading this makes me wish I was at camp right now, making s'mores and hanging out. Unfortunetly, I've never been to camp, so I just have to revel in this story...It's coming along greatly. The last paragraph was my favorite. My favorite line was: "I do not dream, because it is moments like this where I don’t need dreams. Moments like this are made from dreams, and they are just as fleeting."

I'd like to see where this goes. I'm very intreguid. It's a very interesting start.