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jellyandjam 2008-08-24 ch 21, anon.	abusewow, what an amazing chapter. An amazing story overall to be honest. I can't wait for the next chapter. (:
paper airplanes 2008-08-18 ch 21,	abusethis leaves me so hot & bothered. jkjk, but really. I love this story so much. I've just been rereading some of your stuff (catharsis, this, her ashes... I'll review later when I'm feeling less lazy :x) & I think I'm in love with your writing style, for serious. your wording = win status. -awe- sometimes, angela annoys me.. her supposed/apparent naivete + trusting, I guess. (but sometimes, she's something else altogether: / "Funny," I mused. "We talk a hell of a lot more now you're dead." / ) and rayth... woah. I guess it sort of makes sense, though. well, I feel like an idiot for reviewing this late into the story, and I'm sort of not really up to psychoanalyzing 21 chapters into one review ('cause let's admit it: I'm not gonna get it all in one review), but lsjfgdlkgjdklg. I'm so looking forward to your last few chapters.
An Eternity Of Oxygen 2008-08-16 ch 21,	abuseI love this story. Like, seriously love it.
Dances-With-Pen 2008-08-06 ch 21,	abuseWow, this stuff is deep, but there is so much I don't understand. I still don't understand what Bones actually is, and why exactly Scythe does it. I figure he's trying to either cover up something or search for redemption. I still have no clue what Angel did to deserve all this bad stuff. I know she's some kind of catalyst, but what did she actually do? I know the rats are connected with what happened when Scythe's dad took him, but gosh I feel so dumb. This story really makes you think. I really think this story is an enigma, and in my head, I see it as a movie. In the end, if people are still confused, make an FAQ or something. I can't wait until the next chapter. I love Cancer--though he freaks me out a little but not as much as Scythe.
Queen Kat Food 2008-07-31 ch 1,	abuseSo...I started reading this ages ago, then stopped. But I stumbled back, and pretty glad that I did. After an intense marathon of mega-reading I am all caught up, and super excited for what's to come. And I had a bundle of questions during my marathon, but I forgot most of them...and I am sure a good amount were answered. Sometimes Angel frustrates me, she's just too trusting, but then again 8 years is a long time...and I guess if everything I knew were falling apart I would also cling to any semblance of hope. Well I am excited to see what happens next, and if Angel does any butt kicking...that would be interesting, not that it isn't interesting already.
Adithena and Kathyana 2008-07-31 ch 21,	abuseWahh! Your story had me hooked the momment I finished the first chapter. I actually spent my whole day reading all twenty-one chapters of your story. Hehe, a bit obsessive, but it was too good to put down! This is a bit random but, the whole family-connection-drama thing kinda confuses me. XD I guess Eleanor has some kind of connection with the Butchers, seeing as they had her diary stuffed in their attic. The Dad & Mom drama is hard to follow, but I bet everything will be cleared in the last two chapters. ;] One random last thing, Rayth is so ICK now. =[ He used to be my favorite character in the beggining! I kinda of understand his attitude towards the end. I suppose he wanted Angela and Cancer to keep their distance. & He was a bit ** that his house got burned down and took it out of Angela seeing as she's the closest to Cancer...I think. Oh well, I'll find out soon. XD I can't wait 'till you update!~ (Haha, it ryhmed.) -Kathyana
i-rite-gud 2008-07-31 ch 21,	abuseWOW. Well then. This story gets more confusing all the time! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT?!?!! Why would Angel want to help Scythe after he tried to rape her? I think that's when I would call the police and be like "uhm. I think my friend went crazy... He tried to rape me and issues from his past make him do really weird things... I think he needs a therapist or something." I still have pretty much no idea what's going on or how things are linked. I'm thinking that Angel's mom and Scythe's dad got it on and had Lou, and hence the hatred. I'm just not sure how Cancer fits into the picture... :S I'm sure it'll all make sense when everything's wrapped up! I can't wait until you update again! Hopefully it won't take over half a year this time raises eyebrow lol OH bytheway. It's smelled, not smelt. To smelt is to weld metal together, to have smelled is... well I think you know what smelling is:P lmao. Anyways again, LOVED IT and I can't wait until you update so I can finally figure out what's going on! It's like everyone's wearing a mask and all the links between everyone and the causes of their actions are hidden away and I'm SO excited for when the masks come off and links and motives are revealed!! YAY. lol PLEASE UPDATE SON! :D
heart shaped lies 2008-07-30 ch 21,	abuseHappy Birthday! =) I loved every bit of it. It has been seven months but your chappies are as enthralling as ever! I'm on the edge now and I'll kill you if you don't update after that cliffy! That would be..cruel. It looks like things are going to clear up any minute and I can't wait to find out what it is all about. Update soon please!
Emerald123 2008-07-24 ch 21,	abusei will only vote u 4 SKOW if u finish this story in the next 2 months. im NOT going to wait another two years...please?
J.C. Lyn 2008-07-22 ch 21,	abuseI'm glad the words do. I wouldn't actually mind living in the area they live in; the beach, snow and lighthouse. At least I know Scythe is alive - it makes me wonder if Angel's mum had an affair with the twin's father or something. It's sad how I start reading this story when it's nearing its end. Congrats for the nomination.
Toyah 2008-07-21 ch 21, anon.	abuseAfter reading up till this point, the story has really got me thinking. Usually I don't pay that much attention to the tiny details (seeing as they don't play a big part in the plot sometimes), but after reading some of your review replies, curiosity got to me. Why Angela? What does Cancer have against Angela? What happened to Scythe when he was kidnapped by his dad, and why him? Why does Cairon (I believe that's his name) dislike Cancer? Will we ever find out what happened between the parents? And so on... I'll probably be pondering over these questions for a while. I do hope that they will be answered in the last two chapters, or in the FAQ at least. As for errors and such, I did notice that you do place commas in odd spots sometimes. I didn't see this as much in the later chapters, so that's good. (Either that, or I might be thinking of another story) The rest I won't go into, because I can't remember my thoughts on them. Oh and also, will we ever find out the identity of the Predator, Consumer and Producer? I know that it might be pretty obvious at this point in the story, but I just want to make sure. Until the next chapter then. :)
Emerald123 2008-07-20 ch 18,	abuseim half glad and hakf horrified. i always thought Lynn was annoying, but i didnt want for her to DIE!Especially not like this. Scythe has gone mad.
Emerald123 2008-07-20 ch 17,	abusei hate scythe and cancer. rayth all the way!
i am a bug 2008-07-19 ch 21,	abuse! you're story is sosososooso good! overreaction =D nah, its brilliant good luck with the skow awards. btw how is bones illegal and how do you play? awesome story, you're a great writer, can't wait for the next parts =D =D =D
McShortShort 2008-07-19 ch 21,	abusewow this a very intresting chapter

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