Beautifully bittersweet.

Cool! I really like this! Wonderful job! Keep it up!

geez i love your work _adds to fav authors_

the last stanza was golden.

There's a subtle rhyme here that I really like-also, this poem is harsh and powerful. I can relate...to a point, of course.

powerful finishing lines.

Sad yet wonderfully written.

It ends so perfectly.

Haha. I so know what you mean about the whole ridiculous thing... And it like seems like a such a life-threatening thing at the time... Haha. I love this. I love the idea of "cut along the dotted line" like that childs instruction becomes this heart-renching demand. I love it. Absolutely love it. Bravo.

Wow, harsh and creepy. I love the imagery and sarcastic tone you put in this. Beautifully written! D Sara