 xFireLilly18x 2009-11-13 . chapter 12Oh, I absolutely, LOVED this story. It was hilarious at times and heart warming. No grammar or spelling mistakes, which makes for one smooth read, something you don't see often on this site. I enjoyed it thoroughly! thank you for the great read! |
 Your Execution 2009-09-12 . chapter 3I liked it a lot :D |
 Lady Allaria 2009-08-20 . chapter 12Oh! I LOVE IT! Best romance story ever! |
 Lady Allaria 2009-08-20 . chapter 1Oh, my LORD! I love this! This story is amazing if only for the sexy French dude! The French are irresistible. I love their accents. If they are French, they are almost automatically hot unless they have a glaring UNfabulous feature that registers on my HOT-dar as the size of a Humpback Whale, they are automatically hot. I LOVE the French!
Okay, off the French note; your style of writing is fabulous, keep up the good work. A little creative criticism, try to add more action to your characters rather then dialog. Otherwise, it seems like their standing board still, just staring at each other as they talk. Watch spelling and grammar and you should be fine!
Keep on writing, kill Oliver's girlfriend, and live fabulous!
~Lady Allaria~ |
 Lupita M. 2009-08-12 . chapter 12Awesome Story;) |
 Witchyami 2009-07-09 . chapter 12This was a wonderful read. I loved the ending. |
 Arabella Knightfair 2009-06-25 . chapter 12Aww so sweet! I really enjoyed reading this! It was really good.
Ara |
 toffeema 2009-06-22 . chapter 10 aw, I liked that short sweet chapter - my heart was hurting for Ollie! :) |
 Angel Chaser 2009-06-18 . chapter 12Bravo! Bravo! Ancore! Sweetness! I loved it, unforchunetly it was a little short. But i still say it deserves a 7 out of 10. Thats very high on my list, most books dont make it past 5. Well, loved it, and continue writing your poetry of books! |
 queenehlana 2009-06-04 . chapter 12AWW! SO CUTE! |
 randomloosemoose 2009-05-18 . chapter 12What a sweet ending :) |
 wistfulpearl 2009-05-04 . chapter 12i love how you managed to wrap up the entire story in so little chapters! great job! |
 Erica71167 2009-03-22 . chapter 12I adore this story! It's wonderful! Great job! |
 kaw97 2009-02-10 . chapter 12Very nice story! Again, you are a great writer. I especially like that your stories are original and unique. This one was highly entertaining with the language barrier and their antics on the island. And the twist at the end with Elizabeth keeping them apart was great too. You are a great comedy writer! I wish you would write more long stories - I've enjoyed all 3. POGA is now in the top 3-5 favorite stoies I've read on this site. So funny! |
 MelodicNightmare 2009-01-18 . chapter 11What a bitch stupid elizabeth |