 PenMage62442 2006-08-22 . chapter 1This is an amazing story. I love Sakura, Dalton and Takujinn. It's not very far in the story, but you manage to give the reader a good idea of their different personalities. I also admire the attention to detail... the way all the characters' subtle gestures are described. Write more, please! (Takujinn reminds me of a few anime and video game characters... definitely interesting.) |