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| Reviews for To a Friend |
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   purplepants 3/21/07 . chapter 1i like this a lot, and the rhyming does not seem forced at all. nice. |
| a silenced revolution 2/8/07 . chapter 1 Sounds like you're writing this to a friend who cuts... Sad. Well-put though. For concrit: I believe that in the lines "From you’re want to bleed" and "step out and break you're fall" you want to change "you're" to "your". Good poem. :Isabella-May: |
