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Reviews For: Lies and Sorrow

criti-sized
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very expressive poem, and beautifully displayed. I only saw one typo, though, and it was very minor.
Abby Sequioa
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseaw Jordyn I love it! *hug*
Princess-anna57
2006-08-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is an emotional piece. It shows vulnerability yet strength. Excellent work, keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
Jeffro the Clown
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseWoohoo she wrote something again! Holy moly! Yippee! Um...yeah! Keep writing and you better kick some butt today at the soccer game!
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