COOL!

Nice one shot! I thank you sincerely for being the first one to review my romance story, but please, read my fantasy stories! we have something in common, the both of us love fantasy. I wish this one shot was longer, like a chapter story, If it was I would feel like the scenes wasn't as rushed. I think this would be good as a chapter story, but thats my opinion. my favorite part was this qoute: "Then I shall shit out your bones over your village!” I laughed so hard at this that it didn't make sense...

I didn't review it yet. About to sleep. But when I do review it, it'll be alongside of one of the others that I haven't yet reviewed, so I'll probably do that tommorrow. I'm sure it's well written though.