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| hateandkill-D 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseCOOL! |
| writergurlLW 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseNice one shot! I thank you sincerely for being the first one to review my romance story, but please, read my fantasy stories! we have something in common, the both of us love fantasy. I wish this one shot was longer, like a chapter story, If it was I would feel like the scenes wasn't as rushed. I think this would be good as a chapter story, but thats my opinion. my favorite part was this qoute: "Then I shall ** out your bones over your village!” I laughed so hard at this that it didn't make sense... |
| I.O.K.O 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI didn't review it yet. About to sleep. But when I do review it, it'll be alongside of one of the others that I haven't yet reviewed, so I'll probably do that tommorrow. I'm sure it's well written though. |