This is wonderful. No, not wondeful, more and more and more than wonderful. It's beautiful. I can't say that I've been through this. That;s why I don't date. It seems like a waste of time, and when they get bored with you, they dump you and leave you to rot, not caring what you think, or what's happening to you. Thanks for a beautiful poem

** raw and powerful and brilliant and i can't quote all of this because it hurts too much to read and feel it and **, alice - this is amazing. the format makes it even more raw and painful, the pure emotion and anger and pain, i feel it and god, this hurts too much, **, this is amazing. this is ... words can't describe it. you've inspired me once more. this is incredible.

♥ alison

This is wonderfully well worded. Several places flow so quickly, while others halt and hesitate at just the right moment for affect. Sadly telling once again of how modern relationships progress, end, or implode upon themselves. The pace of this really enhances the emotion. The questioning aspect also works well to understand the speakers frame of mind, and what they feel about the situation. Very well worded and written. MD:77.