|Reviews for Real Life|
| TaltushMeiMei 8/22/06 . chapter 1
For me, at least, this doesn't feel like a poem. It just seems like a bunch of words that are supposed to have meaning, but because they're so small in number, it just ends up being kind of empty. Even having just a few more lines would make this into a poem. Just a few lines would make this a good poem.