Sad but great job like always.

this almost has a sinister edge, behind the apathy. another simple but effective piece.

The question is, why does she lie? What makes her feel so insecure that she must lie? Why does she hurt, why does she cry? Really good, like all your poetry, it sends out a cry for help.

short yet really powerful, another great poem everyone can relate to, thanx for so many reviews! and keep up the good work!

Very short and to the point. I think you could go deeper with this, but it's really great! Very sad...

*::Cat::*

simple and sad. and very true.

This was really good, Awesome title too.. Keep it Up!

great job on this one. it flows nice.

rira-chan

P.S _ in all of our reveiws we say thank you! lols! _