I loved this one. Tell me, can you ever make a bad poem?? I mean really this is just beautiful.

you have amazing ideas and an amzing way with words, but (and i dnt think im alone here!) the formatting throws all your work out the window. some of it is okay, i usually like formatting, but this poem is a little OTT.

keep it up tho man, just remember not to distract the reader from the words. ;)

YAY I like it, it kinda reminds me being in the story, anyways good job and good luck in the future ^^

Wow, that was amazing. It made me gasp a bit because of the strong emotion. I could feel it through your words. I've never read a poem like this before. You truly have a unique style. As I keep reading all your poems, I think I'm falling in love with them. (Strange. I know.)

WOW.

This is so beautiful. The rabbit metaphor is /amazing/ and I love the f:o:r:m:a:t. The images are raw and dark. The word that comes to mind is SEAMLESS.

I have a special place for Wonderland since my school did the play. ((I was the hatter))

Thank for the reviews.

(you have a real talent)

(I’m getting my tales mixed up) ^-^ I love that.It's taking me a while to read through all of your stuff, they all give me ideas:P and make me think.Oh, and by the way. there are other ways to talk, then by e-mail;)for example http://w.createforum.com/phpbb/index.php?mforum=poetchatI like forums. They're fun. This way, you can talk to whoever you want to talk to, and no e-mail require:P

This is a very interesting piece. I am drawn to pieces like this because I have my own piece about Alice (“Oh, Alice”) and I am always interested to see what others have drawn from the story. I like the almost-prose style of this. It’s a refreshingly different take on poetry. I found the typography a little tiresome (for me, it lost its meaning through overuse). But to each their own, yes? Anyway, I kept reading because I found the diction in this absolutely hypnotic— just like your Alice, I had to know how it would end. Overall, I think this was well done. Keep writing.