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| die kleine maus 2006-09-29 ch 1,  | abusewhat i love about your poetry is that you never say more than you have to. "parking" is a nice title, and also reminds me of me and my boyfriend. funny, parks fill up in a matter of minutes! (especially here in india, you're never alone) |
| Cait Street 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI used to go to the park with my bf, *sigh*.its an awsome poem and i love how it feels so honest and true. |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseaww, short but sweet eh? the park is ours - its seems like it should be a tuantin line but it fits in perfectly. keep it up ;) |
| shackled 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abusenext time we'll put the gate up behind us so people can't get in, then it will be all ours! |