This sucks. You're a ** ** and really need to be told off. You don't own the god damn site and your ** ** sucks and you have no right at all to ever flame anyone. Nobody, NOBODY messes with me and my friends and that includes you. You can go ** your self to death and I'll see you in hell when I get there and then we'll see, oh, hell yeah, we'll see. You don't even want to know what, but we'll see. Till then you better not ever mess with me or anyone else! If I ever find out about you flaming someone I know, even if I hate them and their stuff really does suck, I swear to the nonexistent god I will hunt your ** down and beat you so bad you really will be dieng and I'll leave you there for a life far worse than death. Don't beleive me? I've expienced death. I AM THE DEVIL! Don't. ever. **. with. me, **.

Babe. I know it hurts (it will) and I am so sorry all this happened to you. You shouldnt have to feel this way. this is a great poem and all but he loves you, I KNOW he loves you. Remember? I'm always right...he loves you, wheather he breaks up with you, stays with you, dosn't trust you, or forgives you...he loves you.

Love, Ellen

Pretty good. I like how you used bold, italic and underlined letters, it added a lot more emphasis and drama. The emotions portrayed were strong, and it describes a situation maybe people have gone through. It's nice to see a poem that reflects a situation like this, it helps to understand one's own feelings.