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Reviews For: Discovering NYC

Dust Mowt
2008-04-29
ch 3,
abuseYay! Nice book-grabbage, though the librarian sounds like a right whore.

Woo! I'm glad Antonio and Sage are so close! Yay yay yay!

I can't think of more to write so, next chapter...
Dust Mowt
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abuseGr, why's that French woman so prejudiced? Evil bitch.

Meh! I'm not so sure your character is growing up in such a friendly environment...

But, *giggles to self*, I liked the part about getting the books! xD, that made me laugh for a short period of time, until I got indigestion and had to stop :D.
Dust Mowt
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseYay! I'm finally reviewing! But then I'm gonna have to update my own story because it has been awhile.

Oo! You feature in here yourself? Very personal. And I see you are confronting issues of race and ethnic origin: cool.

Bouncing on the bed! Yay! That is ALWAYS fun! Fun fun fun! And a revelation! O! I'll read on...
Laura P.
2008-04-08
ch 6, anon.
abuseOMG I loved it so much! I'm so glad that you decided to write something for the mixed people out there! MiXeD PRiDe!
Shadow1290
2006-09-15
ch 6,
abuseum...wht was tht last page?! i wanna no wht happens! MORE SOON please!
Limited Edition
2006-08-25
ch 1,
abuseHa best one today XD You saved me XD
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