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| Sysi 2006-08-23 ch 1,   | According to this chapter I would say you have a characteristic writing style and a talent to write many hints in a couple of pages. That's a useful skill as long as you remember to tie all of them into the plot later on. It's difficult to say anything constructive about your characters, because you clearly have wanted to keep their descriptions and personalities vague in the first chapter. Keep writing this story, will you? |