Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Time

wordsworth in a garbage can
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuseyou write with such a professionalism that's not really seen on this website, such a grandiose idea of beauty. I love it. (lacquery? that is amazing.) A lichen murmured, It is so, it is not so, and crept down her fragrantMillennial tree; his boughs sighed kindly and bloomed. - once again, this is so beautiful.
super happy nuclear girl
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseHow can I resist a poem that was inspired by Pink Floyd? Anyway, beautiful imagry, the words are rich and flow smoothly and made a wonderful poem :) Really nicely done.
Bitch Du Jour
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseThe ending = masterpiece.
behindstonewalls
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abusei really like this poem, its so unique, i especially like the first stanza, thanx for the review and keep up the good work!
Keith Anthony Power Campbel...
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseI liked this poem because it was a touch off-beat and more original than most. 'Twas akin to poetic syncopation. Although I think the man should probably drop the scythe before embracing his family ;p.
Return to Top