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| M.R.Sanner 2006-09-21 ch 1,  | abuseThis story sounds pretty kewl . Wheres the rest of it ?Lol. Anyways , see text books come in handy . I knew it was something of that sort ,but I was to lazy to actually read my text book this morning . Lol. You should look up sumerian names and use them in the story too , it would give it more of an authentic feel to htem . Thank you for the review on my story . Yah I know ,my grammar and spelling are horrid . Lol , but it's only a draft . Oh , and the story gets more intresting and further away from the "typical" frog prince genre with each passing chapter , so stick with it . Thanks and I can't wait till you post new chapter for both of your stories ! ~~Confuzzld Me~~ |
| diamond-dust08 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusequite short, but the two paragraphs that contained the entire plot so far is surprisingly solid. maybe because there was just too few strings to tie together, but in any case, it's a good start. keep on writing. omg, this might be the shortest i've ever made. ~DD |