wow i really like this poem! it's really good... you totally put yourself into perspective and just portrayed it so that i could understand... great job! id really appreciate if you had a look at some of my work.. no pressure of course. peace and love from holly.

I can relate to a lot of this.. the title fits perfectly and the disguise thing is well done and that ending is so sad and beautiful... great piece

Lots of emotion. Good job. I really liked it alot.