perfect. just perefect. gorgeous yet tragic, i love it. it ends on such a great note, lovely. i also adore the title too. great job!

holyshit. your writing has evolved to another level, i mean it.. it's just... wowowow... this is a fave. it's incredible. i crumble under the pressure of its awesomeness.

hey.. i read this the other day when you posted it up on myspace... i like it.. it makes perfect sense.. and it speaks the truth.

oh. my. god."shards of crystal&chicken wire" and the last two stanzas (the mirror bit) are such amazingly gorgeous images that i just about died. beautiful.