I was in the mood for a mecha story and would say that I am glad I found this. I already enjoy the secret command center and await to see what these robots can do, and I hope that other pilots will join Isaac as well.

Excellent story. I love the ideas and how you've integrated Norse Mythology. I've always had a thing for mythological references.

As far as mechanics and story are concerned though, you seem a little too eager to throw everything out there. Isaac is thrown from the heat of battle into an organic being without much of any character development inbetween. If that were me, I would be having a heart attack inside the CAU, especially if some tentacle latched itself to the back of my neck. Isaac seems to be "What's going on" at times, and at other times seems a little too able to perform his role.

I would suggest making him a little more like Shinji Ikari from Evangelion, maybe a little less on the emotional side. As it stands I'm a little unable to determine just what type of person Isaac is. You've done an excellent job with the other characters, however.

Excellent work, looking forward to updates.

Nice chapter. I have to say I forgot about this story for a short while but was still very excited when I saw that there was an update.

However, I did get lost a few times and have to go back and check some stuff out. I just forgot a lot in the time in-between updates. Still, this was a good chapter despite a few things I didn't completely understand.

Keep updating, this is by far one of my favorites.

Another good chapter. I was getting anxious for another update and I had a strange feeling that Surt would be coming into the tale soon.

One of the best parts of this chapter was near the end. You've done a great job making the reader really want to know what 'the Component' is and why it's so important. I, for one, cannot wait to find out.

I caught a few minor typos every now and then. Just words that you seemed to have gotten mixed up but nothing major. It doesn't really take much away from the story.

One of the only problems I've found in this story is your character description. You don't seem to attempt to put much description into your characte's physical appearances and when you do, it seems bit lacking.

Everything else in the story is great. If those few areas are worked on then this story would be even better than it already is.

Keep writing, I can't wait for the next update.

Wow! First chapter and I like it!

"He was out of breath, his muscles demanded he stop, but he was carried forward on wings of fear."

This alone just hooked me! That is, by possibly far, the most beautiful sentence I have ever read. You have to get this published. A few grammaticial mistakes, but nothing that can't be flushed out reading it a second or third time through. This is incredible.

Good story so far. Sorry about the "mecha" thing, I must have been having a blonde moment when I typed my summary up, lol. I knew it was supposed to be mecha not mecca...You can tell because my story it's spelled the correct way. Anyway, thanks for catching that for me.

Awesome chapter. I was really surprised to see an update as I just left my first review for this story last night. Still, this chapter was great.

In particular, the action sequence was great. You gave a very visual image of the fighting and made it extremly enjoyable for the reader.

Also, I like how your slowly starting to give out information about the CAUs. Such as how they are living creatures and how they may be able to reproduce. Those are things that help a mecha story be original and great.

Keep writing, I'll sure keep reviewing!

Wow, this is an amazing story. I don't usually read mecha stories, well I never read mecha stories but there was something about this one that just made me want to read it and I sure am glad I did.

Let me start by saying your description is probably the best thing about this story. You use words that give a great effect to your writing and it really does help to make the story interesting to the reader.

Your plot seems much more original and fresh than most stories. I really like how your kind of keeping the reader in the dark about a lot of things, it just makes us wanna keep reading. Actually, the only knowledge I have about Ragnarok is from what I learned while playing Valkyrie Profile but your little descriptions in the beginning of each chapter really help a lot.

Now, for the criticism. The only thing I have to say you can improve on is your dialouge. It just seems like you never put much detail into the dialouge, not half as much as you put in the rest of the story at least. Just work on that a bit.

Overall, awesome story and defintely one of the best I've read. Keep writing, I'll be waiting.

By the way, could you check out a few of my stories please. Preferablly Espoir but it doesn't really matter. Thanks a lot and keep up the good work!

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Nice descriptions. Its easy to picture what's going on. Armored suit stories are usually cool. I like this story, and I'll read more when you post.

If you could check out my story "Strike Me Down" I'd appriciate it.