 KaseyLovesNoOne 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Lovely piece. Dark and moving. I'm certainly not a stranger to self mutilation, which is perhaps why this touched me so. The wording is perfect, the italics for the lines "My mind screams“join in, and revel in the disaster”But I can’tNot once moreOr ever again"were excellent, and I esspecially liked the spacing between the word "together". It flowed very well with the poem. Masterful job! |