Omg. x3 Amazing! Favorited!

Ha! Very amusing piece, and very brilliantly done. I think I adore you.

that was so good! I have to say though, if anyone out there that reads this and says, "That sounds like me" they need to go to a little padded white room ;) I do have to ask seeing as how I am a little behind the times what does, "wntrfst" mean?

DC

Nice one!
'rofl' described my reaction perfectly

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA.

I LOVE THIS! YOU GENIUS! :))

HAHAHAHAHAHAA!
OMG! i cracked up with that last little bit!
so hilarious! well done XD
~Rose~

omg! rofl!
Seriously though, that was funny. Do you know how bad it is when you break into helpless giggles in the library? I think the kid at the next computer thought I was mental.
Great story
Kali

...you changed the answer!
hahahahahahahahaha i like this one...the other one broke my heart just a little bit ;)

It took every last ounce of self control I had not to burst out laughing while I reading this story because my roommate is still asleep. XD This is so indescribably cute and so hilarious I went through and read it a second time just so I could enjoy the SPOTSPOTSPOTs again. Those are the best part of the story, by the way. Moreso than the LOLLERSKATES and Sally's mental rambling and the five-second email and the ending. I love this little fic to pieces.

-Shdwphoenix

This is way cute...

the words SPOTSPOTSPOT make me laugh out loud. in the non LOL way. I guess a little known fact about me is that the word "LOL", "ROFL", etc also make me laugh because I imagine a 13 year old girl IMing people being like "LOL ASL R U SINGLE LOL!11". it's like the weird thing, but the words just look funny to me now, and I laugh whenever I see it. I guess my disease has caught on to all words in caps.

weirdness aside, I loved it, and tom's SISTERS email was amusing. the first chapter is the winner for me though. there's something almost classic [in the old fashioned but good sort of way] about how she addresses parts of herself. like Nerve. but also funny. funny but classic. how writerly.

Ha! This was amazing. Very different. I absolutely adore how she talks to the different... parts/sectors (?!) of her body. Hand, Feelings, Brain. Her anxiety, her compulsiveness, it's so short, but the characterization was wonderful.

And the ending?! Genius!

Gah!

Oh my gosh.

I Loved it.

;)allie

Oh MY God.

Unpredictable chapter. Well done. Even if it WAS only 5 words... teeheehee.

Now that that's aside, you should continue. I have no further suggestions as I am a troglodite and my brain is made of dogmeat.

Keep it up,

Lavena

meheh that's cute...the only thing is that with this story and with "Quattrocentista"(sp?), I find it distracting when you replace brandnames with made up names (i.e. Hello Kitty-->Goodbye Kitty; Super Smash Brothers--> Super Smash Sisters), although I understand why you do it...I dunno...that's it. Good otherwise though