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| debbycake 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so good! I have to say though, if anyone out there that reads this and says, "That sounds like me" they need to go to a little padded white room ;) I do have to ask seeing as how I am a little behind the times what does, "wntrfst" mean? DC |
| teenqueen21 2008-03-19 ch 2,  | abuseNice one! 'rofl' described my reaction perfectly |
| P 2008-03-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA. I LOVE THIS! YOU GENIUS! :)) |
| RoseLife 2007-11-12 ch 2, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAA! OMG! i cracked up with that last little bit! so hilarious! well done XD ~Rose~ |
| Kalitena 2007-08-23 ch 2, | abuseomg! rofl! Seriously though, that was funny. Do you know how bad it is when you break into helpless giggles in the library? I think the kid at the next computer thought I was mental. Great story Kali |
| whacked 2006-10-29 ch 2, anon. | abuse...you changed the answer! hahahahahahahahaha i like this one...the other one broke my heart just a little bit ;) |
| Shdwphoenix 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseIt took every last ounce of self control I had not to burst out laughing while I reading this story because my roommate is still asleep. XD This is so indescribably cute and so hilarious I went through and read it a second time just so I could enjoy the SPOTSPOTSPOTs again. Those are the best part of the story, by the way. Moreso than the LOLLERSKATES and Sally's mental rambling and the five-second email and the ending. I love this little fic to pieces. -Shdwphoenix |
| luv me like no other 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is way cute... |
| CK, written, whatev 2006-09-03 ch 2, anon. | abusethe words SPOTSPOTSPOT make me laugh out loud. in the non LOL way. I guess a little known fact about me is that the word "LOL", "ROFL", etc also make me laugh because I imagine a 13 year old girl IMing people being like "LOL ASL R U SINGLE LOL!11". it's like the weird thing, but the words just look funny to me now, and I laugh whenever I see it. I guess my disease has caught on to all words in caps. weirdness aside, I loved it, and tom's SISTERS email was amusing. the first chapter is the winner for me though. there's something almost classic [in the old fashioned but good sort of way] about how she addresses parts of herself. like Nerve. but also funny. funny but classic. how writerly. |
| Under the Stars 2006-08-29 ch 2, | abuseHa! This was amazing. Very different. I absolutely adore how she talks to the different... parts/sectors (?!) of her body. Hand, Feelings, Brain. Her anxiety, her compulsiveness, it's so short, but the characterization was wonderful. And the ending?! Genius! |
| special 2006-08-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseGah! Oh my gosh. I Loved it. ;)allie |
| Lavena 2006-08-27 ch 2, | abuseOh MY God. Unpredictable chapter. Well done. Even if it WAS only 5 words... teeheehee. Now that that's aside, you should continue. I have no further suggestions as I am a troglodite and my brain is made of dogmeat. Keep it up, Lavena |
| superheroesarereal 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abusemeheh that's cute...the only thing is that with this story and with "Quattrocentista"(sp?), I find it distracting when you replace brandnames with made up names (i.e. Hello Kitty-->Goodbye Kitty; Super Smash Brothers--> Super Smash Sisters), although I understand why you do it...I dunno...that's it. Good otherwise though |
| Vuctirua 2006-08-24 ch 2, | abuseoh wow this was really good. i really liked it a lot and i like your sense of humor. very good. so good i must add to my favorite stories list. no objections i hope? (by the way i always thought ROFL sounded like the noise someone makes when they upchuck.) |
| whacked 2006-08-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseouch. I don't blame him though. |